Monday, February 1, 2016

PB2A: "I'm Going to Instagram It!"


Throughout my college career, I have read my fair share of scholarly articles. As a Communication major, I’ve not only had to find sources pertaining to class material, but also to support my own research. It is no secret that scholarly articles can be somewhat boring and tough to read through. This can be especially true when the subject matter is dry and the researchers use jargon you aren't entirely familiar with. However, the article “I’m Going to Instagram It! An Analysis of Athlete Self-Presentation on Instagram,” by Smith and Sanderson, was surprisingly different. It was easy to understand and more importantly, easy to see conventions and patterns in contained. 

More often than not, academic writing—whether it be a research paper, persuasive essay, or even an email to a professor—takes on a formal and professional tone. “I’m Going to Instagram It!” follows this convention and many others typically found in scholarly articles. Academic publications always begin with a detailed title that gives readers a clear idea of the topic being presented. In this particular title, readers can easily gather a rough idea of the who, what, where, and why of the paper. Immediately following the title is an abstract, which is basically a summary of what is to come in the rest of the article. It briefly discusses the author’s main points and basic findings. Following the abstract is a multitude of different headings and subheadings.These can vary from article to article, but will always appear in a scholarly publication in some form or another. In “I’m Going to Instagram It!” each subheading focuses on one aspect of the researcher’s hypothesis. For example, the first subheading titled Self-Presentation is dedicated specifically to defining the meaning of self-presentation and what it entails. After defining the different variables, the article continues into the method section, which is an in depth explanation of the research process. This includes how the sample was obtained, how the data was collected, and how the research was coded. After the method comes the results. This is where it can get especially hard for readers to follow along. The results section is filled with a lot of numerical data and little explanation as to what it actually means. Luckily, the discussion immediately follows the results. This is where the researcher makes sense of the results and answers whether or not the research questions or hypothesis was answered. Throughout the entirety of the paper, the researcher references other works and publications. In doing this, the researcher is able to support their ideas with already existing ones, as well as build credibility. These references are compiled into a list, and are put at the end, completing the publication. 

“I’m Going to Instagram It!”—much like most scholarly articles—was organized in a way that made it easy to follow and find information. At the end of the Literature Review section, Smith and Sanderson posed three research questions:
  • RQ1: How were Goffman’s gender displays shown through Instagram photos by athletes as a form of self-presentation?
  • RQ2: What were the differences between the gender displays in the self-presentation behaviors of the athletes?
  • RQ3: What themes emerged from the captions used by the athletes in their Instagram photos?

The questions are arranged in this way to distinguish them from the rest of the text and to make it easy to go back to if need be. Some of the findings of this publication were that women were much more likely to partake in Goffman’s idea of ritualistic touching—touching another person or object— than were men.This behavior has been deemed feminine in the past and continues to be supported in such a way. Researchers also found that athletes posted more full length shots than expected. Past research has shown that power is linked to close-framed shots, such as a headshot. However, an athlete’s body and physique can often times be attributed to power and skill level. Athletes work hard to maintain their body and want to show it off.

There are many components that need to come together in an academic publication, and each section plays an integral role in the overall product. In my opinion, the discussion is the most important part of not only “I’m Going to Instagram It!” but also any scholarly work. While the early sections give readers much needed background information, and the results show the actual findings, the discussion is what brings everything together. This is where Smith and Sanderson draw conclusions and present their ideas based off of the data. Each research question is fully answered in the discussion, leaving readers with no doubts as to the purpose and discoveries of the article.

Even though many scholarly publications can be boring and tough to read, some such as I'm going to Instagram it, aren't so bad. It was interesting to look at this work from a different perspective than the one I usually would read it from. It wasn't about understanding everything, but rather finding the conventions and asking myself why they exist.





References
 Smith, L., & Sanderson, J. (2015). I'm Going to Instagram It! An Analysis of Athlete Self-Presentation on Instagram. Journal of Broadcasting & Electronic Media, 59(2), 342-358. 

5 comments:

  1. Hi! I was immediately drawn to read your response because of the title actually; I figured if you read an academic report regarding Instagram it must be interesting. And I was right! I really liked the way you structured your PB2A by first writing about the conventions and then digging deeper into the specifics of your article. Oddly enough, you and I found a lot of the same conventions and structured our papers very similarly, so I think that means we must be doing something correctly! I also really liked how you separated the research questions and then had a follow up paragraph addressing their answers and the author's findings. Overall, really great response and I enjoyed reading it!

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  2. I really enjoyed reading this PB2A, as I have a fitness based Instagram account myself! While I thought that this assignment had to involved an extremely dry and somewhat boring research paper filled with jargon and data, you totally turned it around with this cool article about Instagram. I appreciated your analysis of the conventions present in your paper, and how the researchers presented their findings in a way that builds credibility and helps readers to understand the results of the study. I completely agree that the discussion is the most essential part of research papers, as it ties all the ideas together and provides some clarity to all the quantitative data involved with the experimentation. Great job!

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  3. Just like Amy, I also was drawn to read your response because of the title. It seemed like it would have an interesting perspective and wouldn't be too boring, both of which I found to be true after reading. I thought the format of your paper was unique and clever, and it kept me interested while reading. It was organized from start to finish, and I really enjoyed your use of visual examples. As i would consider myself a visual learner, any visuals help me understand the text more in depth. Overall, I didn't see anything wrong with this response, good job!

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  4. Alexandra

    First off, I loved your title. I think having a creative, fun title is a good way to draw readers into your piece and have them interested before they ever actually read anything. I also like how you bullet pointed the research questions posed in the publication. It made the very easy to identify. I also really enjoyed how you related the topic of the publication to yourself in the first paragraph. It was a really good introduction and transition into your paper. I also loved your second paragraph, but maybe you could split it into two since it is so long. Zack warned me about long paragraphs in my WP1. If it's important enough to make the paragraph super long, maybe give it it's own paragraph! Overall, I thought your writing was extremely clear and sounded nice. Good job!

    Piper Harris

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  5. Hey Alexandra,

    The reason I chose to read your blog was because of the title! It immediately grabbed my attention, as would any interesting title. I love your incorporation of visuals. I'm a visual learner, so the screen shots of the Instagram posts really helped me understand what you were trying to convey in your writing. It would have been even more useful if you wrote a short sentence just describing how the visuals relate to your text; rather than just putting them in the middle of the paragraph. Overall, the organization was fantastic and your discussion was very easy to follow. Great job!

    Jaimee

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